Monday, April 24, 2023

Time Travel: The Never Mind Factor

"I hate temporal mechanics!"  --Chief Engineer Miles O'Brien, STAR TREK: DEEP SPACE NINE


“What did you do this time, Barry?”  Oliver Queen, THE FLASH


The biggest problem with time travel as a plot device, beyond the mind-numbing paradoxes, is the “never mind” factor when the author uses time travel to fix things.


Something really horrible happens to the main characters, more than a few die, evil starts taking over the world, and life as we know it is about over, then one of the good guys uses time travel to go back before it starts and stops whatever the original cause of the whole mess was.  Everything returns to exactly the way it was before the story started.


In other words, nothing really happened because nothing changes.  I always say “never mind” then something rude about the writing.


That “never mind” moment means you are cheating the reader of genuine experience.  If unhappiness, danger, and death no longer can be trusted to have meaning, the reader may stop caring when permanent changing moments happen.


The reader can also feel cheated to the point she no longer trusts anything you write, and may very well say “never mind” when your next book is out.


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