Showing posts with label prologue. Show all posts
Showing posts with label prologue. Show all posts

Monday, March 4, 2024

No Prologue Needed, Beginnings

 You want to start a novel at an exciting moment that involves the main character which will draw the reader into the story to see what will happen next, but you can't give too much information too soon.

Instead, you give the reader just enough information to understand what's going on.


For example, the main character faces an angry goblin in a dark alley of some big city.


She can hear a police siren which, unfortunately, is moving away from where she is. Mentally or aloud, she cusses her luck for choosing a job like this.


The goblin knocks her gun out of her hand, and it lands in the sewer drain so she lifts her hands, whispers a spell, and flames shoot of her hands, but the goblin doesn't go down. The injury makes him even angrier. 


We now know she's a magic user of some sort, the modern world is ours or isn't ours by little details, that magical creatures can enter here, and it's her job to stop them.  She is also in seriously deep poo because she is now defenseless against a furious goblin.


Later, you'll tell the reader about her role as a guardian of normal Earth and, later still, about her home on a parallel magic world, but you'll do it in bits and pieces like clues to a puzzle the reader is trying to understand.


Having these clues of the world and trying to understand it is as important a puzzle for the reader as the plot, and it's as enjoyable. Don't cheat the reader by giving away too much.   

Monday, January 20, 2020

Prologues

Do you need a prologue?

Used correctly, a prologue can add to a novel and grab the reader’s attention immediately. 

Used incorrectly, prologues are nothing but back story or an info dump which adds only a boring beginning.  They can also give too much information which takes away from the reader’s desire to learn more and make guesses.  

Most inexperienced writers believe that the reader has to be told everything up front, or she won't understand.  Readers understand, though, when various bits of important information are layered through the story.

So, do you need that prologue?  If it grabs the reader’s attention, and the first chapter can't, then the prologue works. If it doesn’t, don’t use it.