Adventures in Writing: October 2016

Monday, October 31, 2016

The Character Hook

"Keeping the Reader Reading," Part 3

The hook which is the beginning of the plot, and the visual and sensual hooks aren't enough to create a story. We need one or more characters who will let us see what they see and experience the events as they do. These characters must have an important goal and be characters the reader can like or empathize with.

In the scenes I've already posted, we have Faith Cody, a school teacher, who becomes involved in the rescue of the two kidnapping children she'd been hired to tend for the summer. She will be the main character the reader will follow through this plot.

She's a nice lady and someone a reader can root for, and her goal--the rescue of two small children-- is a very worthy one. She will be our viewpoint character.

The character hook tends to take longer to introduce, but starting with jeopardy as I did with Faith grabs the reader so she will keep reading to learn more about Faith and her plot goal.

NOTE: If you’d like to read the first chapter of THE GAME WE PLAY to see how I laid out my various hooks, go here.

http://www.marilynnbyerly.com/page7a.html

Wednesday, October 26, 2016

Links of Interest

FACEBOOK ADS, GOOD OR BAD?

http://www.thepassivevoice.com/2016/10/thinking-of-running-a-facebook-ad-proceed-with-caution

PROMOTING YOUR NEXT BOOK IN YOUR CURRENT ONE:

https://insights.bookbub.com/promoting-a-sequel-in-a-books-back-matter-with-examples

CREATING SINGLE AUTHOR BOX SETS:

http://blog.janicehardy.com/2016/10/creating-single-author-box-sets-part-one.html

INSTAGRAM FOR AUTHORS:

http://www.adventuresinyapublishing.com/2016/10/instagram-for-authors-reach-new-readers.html

PICKING THE RIGHT BOOK TITLE:

http://annerallen.com/book-titles-10-tips-choose-right-title/

BOOK PRODUCTION CHECK LIST:

https://www.bookworks.com/2016/10/a-book-production-checklist-for-indie-authors/

THE SEARCH FOR CLUES AND WHAT CAN INTERFERE WITH THAT:

http://thrillwriting.blogspot.com/2016/10/clue-awareness-info-for-crime-writers.html

FINDING AND FIXING PLOT HOLES:

http://thrillwriting.blogspot.com/2016/10/clue-awareness-info-for-crime-writers.html

HOW HORROR WRITING TECHNIQUES CAN IMPROVE YOUR WRITING:

https://warriorwriters.wordpress.com/2016/10/21/how-horror-fiction-can-make-us-better-writers/

USING AMAZON’S AND OTHERS’ INTERNATIONAL PLATFORMS TO INCREASE AUDIENCE:

http://elizabethspanncraig.com/4985/considering-our-international-audience/

CONTRACTS, THE EVILS OF THE NONCOMPETE CLAUSE:

http://www.publishingcrawl.com/2016/09/14/clause-by-clause-non-compete/

SELF-PUB BUSINESS BASICS:

http://selfpublishingadvice.org/the-indie-author-business-plan-the-basics-kimberley-grabas/

CONTRACTS, DANGERS IN TRADE CONTRACTS:

http://selfpublishingadvice.org/key-clauses-indie-authors-need-to-watch-for-in-trade-publishing-contracts-orna-ross-toby-mundy/

GRAMMAR RESOURCES:

http://www.nownovel.com/blog/great-grammar-tips-for-writers/

WRITING DEAF CHARACTERS:

https://www.tfrohock.com/blog/2016/9/12/writing-deaf-characters

MAKING YOUR CHARACTER MEMORABLE:

http://www.darcypattison.com/revision/why-people-forget-your-character

WHEN NOTHING HAPPENS:

http://labelleseditorialservices.com/blog/when-nothing-happens-in-a-scene/

WRITING CREEPY SCENES:

http://romanceuniversity.org/2016/10/26/writing-creepy-scenes-by-rayne-hall/

STARTING AGAIN AFTER A BREAK:

http://blog.janicehardy.com/2016/10/5-ways-to-restart-your-writing-after.html

Monday, October 24, 2016

Visual and Sensual Details as a Hook

"Keeping the Reader Reading," Part 2

The plot hook isn't the only thing that keeps the reader reading.

Here's two versions of THE GAME WE PLAY’s opening.

Faith Cody lay in bed. She tossed and turned then moaned at a horrible nightmare. She heard the sound of her moan and woke up. This wasn't her room. Where was she? Why was she here? Why was the room so fuzzy?

A man leaned over her. He was blurred, too. Somehow, she knew he was going to rape her. As his hand reached her face, she screamed.

In comparison:

Light and shadow undulated around her in a drugged blur, but she could distinguish enough corners and shapes to know she lay in a strange bedroom. Rainy afternoon gray light billowed through thin, white curtains, and she could smell the sea and the freshly laundered sheets of her bed. The ceiling above her was spattered with large shadows of raindrops she couldn't see on the windows.

A man, a blur of flesh tones and angles, leaned over her. His hand became solid shape as it reached her face. Her nameless dread became terror, and she cringed away, expecting rape.

The second gives visual details -- corners, shapes, white curtains, the shadows of raindrops. It also gives details from the other senses -- the smell of the ocean and the sheets, and the feel of the wind from the open window. The reader should be in that room at this point because she can visualize it.

Getting the reader’s head into your book as fast as possible is as much a hook as the plot questions you’ve asked.

Wednesday, October 19, 2016

Links of Interest

SELF-PUBLISHING 101:

http://blog.janicehardy.com/2013/07/what-you-really-want-to-know-about-self.html

WHAT NEXT IS USUALLY ALREADY IN YOUR STORY:

http://writerunboxed.com/2016/10/13/where-drama-really-comes-from

HOW NARRATIVE DISTANCE AFFECTS SHOW, NOT TELL:

http://romanceuniversity.org/2016/10/12/how-your-narrative-distance-affects-show-dont-tell-by-janice-hardy/

UNDERSTANDING MOTIVATION:

http://marcykennedy.com/2016/10/understanding-goal-motivation-conflict-motivation

NANOWRITE PLANNER:

http://www.thewritersalleyblog.com/2016/10/how-to-prepare-for-nanowrimo-now-free.html

WORDS OF WISDOM ON ALL ASPECTS OF YOUR WRITING CAREER:

http://wegrowmedia.com/creating-a-support-system-for-your-creative-work/

THREE KINDS OF STORY ARCS:

http://www.adventuresinyapublishing.com/2016/10/solving-fiction-problems-three-kinds-of.html

POISONS IN FANTASY:

http://dankoboldt.com/poisons-in-sff/

AMAZON’S NEW REVIEW POLICIES AND AUTHORS:

http://annerallen.com/amazons-new-review-rules-should-authors-worry/

A GUIDE TO COSTS OF SELF-PUBLISHING:

http://inkandquills.com/2016/10/16/self-publishing-costs-royalties/

GREEN’S DICTIONARY OF SLANG NOW ONLINE:

https://greensdictofslang.com

GOOGLE AND AMAZON ARE SCREWING MUSIC COPYRIGHT OWNERS:

http://www.thepassivevoice.com/2016/10/google-and-amazon-leverage-copyright-loophole-to-use-songs-without-paying-songwriters

FINDING THE HEART OF YOUR STORY:

http://www.helpingwritersbecomeauthors.com/nanowrimo-guide-outlining-find-heart-of-your-story/

WHICH CHARACTER IS THE HEART OF THE NOVEL:

http://blog.janicehardy.com/2016/10/which-character-is-heart-of-your-novel.html

CONVEYING EMOTION:

http://allwritefictionadvice.blogspot.com/2016/10/the-problem-with-conveying-emotion.html

http://www.trademarkandcopyrightlawblog.com/2016/10/10-copyright-cases-every-fan-fiction-writer-should-know-about/

CHOOSING THE RIGHT PRICE FOR YOUR EBOOK:

http://fixmystory.com/2016/08/18/the-ultimate-guide-to-choosing-the-right-price-for-your-book/

BEWARE OF SELF-PUB PREDATORS:

http://thebookshepherd.com/beware-of-the-self-publishing-predators.html

LIST OF CHARACTER ARCHETYPES:

https://hunterswritings.com/2016/09/09/index-post-character-archetypes-a-to-z/

THREE WAYS TO SPOT TELLING:

https://www.helpingwritersbecomeauthors.com/3-ways-writers-can-instantly-spot-telling/

Monday, October 17, 2016

The First Hook

Today, I'm starting a series of blogs called "Keeping the Reader Reading" about what's needed to bring your reader into your story and keep him there until the very end.

THE FIRST HOOK

What gets us into a story? What keeps us there?

Let's look at two beginnings of the same story.

Faith Cody finished her packing by tossing in several paperback historical novels, straightened, and closed her suitcase.

She was so excited. Today, she was going on the closest thing to a vacation she'd had for years-- over a month at Myrtle Beach acting as the nanny for two darling children.

Here's the second beginning--

Hideous creatures crouched in the darkness.

Faith Cody, her mind seeking consciousness, struggled against the clinging tentacles of that drugged darkness.

Her body twisted in the throes of nightmare, and she moaned, the deep-chested sound dragging her into the light. But when she opened her eyes, a monster waited there as well.

A man, a blur of flesh tones and angles, leaned over her. His hand became solid shape as it reached her face. Her nameless dread became terror, and she cringed away expecting rape.

From THE GAME WE PLAY

Which beginning draws the reader in? I imagine most readers would say the second one.

Why?

Both stories are about the same person on the same day, but the second story begins at an important, exciting moment, and the questions it asks of the reader makes her want to keep reading. Why has Faith been drugged? Where is she? Who is the man leaning over her and what will he do to her?

The moment and those questions are called the hook. In the average short story, the first hook should be in the first few paragraphs; in the average novel, within the first few pages, but the sooner the better.