Monday, June 10, 2013

Jim Butcher's STORM FRONT, Part 2


NOTE:  If you’ve not read last Monday’s article introducing the subject and defining the urban fantasy novel, please do.



THE PRIVATE EYE NOVEL

The American private eye novel gained its popularity during the Thirties and Forties with writers like Dashiell Hammett (Sam Spade) and Raymond Chandler (Philip Marlowe).  

These "hardboiled" mysteries were about out-of-luck downtrodden PIs who worked the mean streets of a big city where the law and the establishment were often as crooked or incompetent as the criminals and gangsters.

Detnovel.com defines them this way, 

"The protagonist was usually a detective of the 'private eye' variety, or functionally similar. He or she used special expertise to restore a loss, which could mean finding a missing object or bringing a murderer to justice. They did so for little or no money, often simply for justice. They met challenges, trials, obstacles, and temporary defeats — were kidnapped, beaten, shot, knifed, snubbed, humiliated, and dismissed as inferiors. It became a ritual that the protagonist had to pass out, either from a beating or drugs."

The detective may be crooked to survive in this brutal world, but he lives by a code.  Again, Detnovel.com--

"The detective should be anonymous, eschew publicity, be close-mouthed, and secretive. He or she protects good people from bad people, who do not live by the rules; thus, one may break the rules in dealing with them. The detective ignores rules and conventions of behavior, because the client pays for this. Loyalty to the client is very important, but may be superseded by a personal sense of justice or the rule of law. The detective must keep an emotional distance from the people in the case, retain an objective point of view, and consider all pertinent clues."

Most versions of the "code" share these common points. The private eye is 

1. dedicated to the client, 
2. economical, if not thrifty, in his expenses and personal habits, 
3. loyal to his profession, 
4. cooperative, to some degree, with the police, 
5. concerned with self-survival, and
6. unwilling to be duped by anyone. 


In this type of mystery, the duality of good and evil are obvious.  For every good or reasonably good type of character, an evil one exists.  Two worlds also exist--that of poverty and helplessness in contrast to a world of power and money.  The PI is able to go to both worlds to gain some sort of justice for his client.

Ironically, he isn't accepted in either world.

In this mix of two worlds of good and evil are good and bad cops, Madonnas and whores, crazed killers and criminal masterminds.

One of the most notable characters in the PI novel is the femme fatale.

"The femme fatale, defined simply, is an irresistibly attractive woman, especially one who leads men into danger. In hard-boiled fiction, she is usually the protagonist's romantic interest. …   The protagonist's involvement with her may range from mild flirtation to passionate sex, but in the denouement he must reject or leave her, for the revealed plot shows her to be one of the causes of the crime." Detnovel.com

The classic example of the PI novel and the noir movie is Dashiell Hammett's The Maltese Falcon starring Humphrey Bogart as Sam Spade.  (You can rent it from iTunes or Netflix if you've never seen it, and you should since it's one of the best movies of all time.)  

To read a synopsis of the movie plot, I suggest this Wikipedia entry.


HARRY DRESDEN, PI

Although a wizard, Harry has most PI tropes down pat.  In the first scene, his voice is that of a world-weary detective with added snark, mainly about being a wizard.  His office rent is late, and he is money and case poor in the best tradition of the PI.

He has a close connection with an honest cop, Karrin Murphy.

He also has the chivalry common to the knight errant PI.  He protects the weak, and he is polite to the ladies.

<<I opened the door for her, and gallantly gestured for her to go in. It was an old contest of ours. Maybe my values are outdated, but I come from an old school of thought. I think that men ought to treat women like something other than just shorter, weaker men with breasts. Try and convict me if I'm a bad person for thinking so.  I enjoy treating a woman like a lady, opening doors for her, paying for shared meals, giving flowers--all that sort of thing.>>

Murphy even gets him to help her by playing the damsel in distress when she calls him into the murder scene that starts the novel.

Throughout this novel, he follows the detective's code listed above.

1. He remains dedicated and perseveres for both of his clients-- Murphy and Monica, even at the cost of his own safety.

2. He needs his fees from both women, but it isn't about the money for him.  It is about the justice and his need to protect Monica and her children as well as Murphy from a dark world of magic she cannot survive.

3. He believes in his profession of helping others as well as his magical calling.  Magic, for him, is beautiful and life-affirming, and the black wizard who kills by blowing peoples' chests apart is a blasphemy to life and magic.

4. He is willing to work with the police, but he cannot cross certain lines of privacy and information about magic and the magical world which they must not be a part of.

5. He is concerned about self-survival, and his own coming death from the black wizard and a thunderstorm are what drives him to face impossible odds, but he is also willing to fight a giant scorpion to save Murphy's life when he could run.

6. He also refuses to be lied to by those for and against him, and he is driven to find out the truth despite the dangers to himself.

THE TWO WORLDS

The PI is caught between two worlds, usually that of the powerful and rich and that of the poor and dispossessed.  He walks between these worlds to find the solution to the crime and to save his client who is trapped in some way.

Harry's two worlds are the real world and the magical world.

By his own choice, Harry has set himself up as a wizard for hire in the real world, an unprecedented decision because wizards of the NeverNever tend to be secretive about their gifts, and they don't employ them to help nonmagicals.

Harry's motivation for this decision is his own past.  He was betrayed by his magical mentor and had to save his own life against black magic by killing the other man.  This killing is not only antithetical to the nature of and his belief in magic; it made him a bad guy to his own people.  Only through the intervention of Ebenezar McCoy was he saved from summary execution. 

The killing of his mentor, even though it was justified, bothers Harry, and his PI work is part of his way of making amends. He has also felt the helplessness of being accused of a crime with no one on his side to help him so he is very much for the underdog.

At the  beginning of STORM FRONT, he is under the Doom of Damocles which means he faces execution for the slightest crime.  He is an outcast among his own people, and he receives no help from the Wardens and White Council when he faces magical enemies.

Living among humans as a wizard, however, insures that Harry is an outcast among humans, as well.  In the first scene, the mailman mocks him for being crazy, and every human he encounters either has the same feeling, or they fear Harry.  Few will meet his gaze, and most won't tell him their names for fear of a controlling spell being used against them.

His only allies are Murphy who is also an outcast in the police force for believing in the supernatural and for being the head of the reviled Special Investigations Unit, and Mac McAnally a barkeeper in the real world with a clientele of the much less powerful magicals in Chicago.

But when Murphy's own career is threatened and she no longer trusts Harry enough to believe his silence about the magical murders is for her own sake, she is more than willing to take Harry down.  

GOOD COP, BAD COP

The duality of good and evil is also shown with the characters in the novel.

Murphy is obviously the good cop.  She does her job honestly, and she is open to the possibility of the supernatural.  Like most good cops, she is hindered by an incompetent bureaucracy as well as her own tendency to go outside standard rules to get her job done.

Warden Morgan is the bad cop who hinders more than helps by his threats to Harry as well as his blindness to Harry's innocence and the presence of the black wizard. The irony, of course, is that Harry must do the job of the Wardens by stopping the black wizard.

GOOD GANGSTER, EVIL GANGSTER

John Marcone is the local human crime boss.  Like a tiger, he goes for the kill in the most efficient way possible with little emotion and less regret.  However, he has such control over local crime that chaos no longer reigns, and he has his own sense of order as well as his own honorable code of behavior.  

Bianca is his magical counterpart.  A Red Court vampire, she runs an expensive escort service.  She is ruled by her passions and attacks Harry from fear rather than logic.  She is also vain about her human seeming and hates Harry for seeing the decaying monster she truly is.  

Both Bianca and Marcone are tied together because her prostitute and his bodyguard are killed by the black wizard who blows out both victims' hearts.

THE FEMME FATALE, THE NICE GIRL

Linda is dead prostitute Jennifer's close friend.  A former prostitute herself, she uses her sexuality against Harry and leads him closer to finding the identity of the black wizard.  Her own duplicity about her employers and the magical orgies at the lake house seal her fate.  

Susan is the nice girl.  Although a reporter who would love Harry's knowledge of the supernatural, she is genuinely interested in him, and she takes a demon attack with aplomb.  


GOOD WIZARD, BAD WIZARD

Harry, of course, is the good wizard who follows the laws of magic and refuses to do evil.

Victor Sells is everything Harry isn't but could be.

The most telling scene is when Harry starts walking toward the lake house for his final confrontation and is nearly seduced by the black magic of the place with its offers of limitless power.  Harry refuses it, and he avoids black magic when he fights Victor and the demon although he's in way over his head.

GOOD MOM, BAD MOM

I would be remiss after mentioning the scene of Harry's temptation not to mention the presence of his mother who pushes his hand to her pentacle which represents good magic and saves him.

Monica is the bad mom who can't protect her children from her perverted and evil husband and must depend on her sister Jennifer and Harry to do this for her.

On a side note, Harry's mom's ghostly presence has never been used since in the series, and I wonder if Butcher has dropped this element or whether she will be a stronger presence in the coming novels.

PART THREE:




Wednesday, June 5, 2013

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Monday, June 3, 2013

Jim Butcher's STORM FRONT, Part 1


Welcome to my summer reading blogs on Jim Butcher's STORM FRONT.

I've been a Jim Butcher fan for years, and I was lucky enough to meet him and sit with him on several panels at a sf con several years back.  

Butcher has created one of the most fascinating urban fantasy series and heroes in the industry, and I imagine many of us are more than a little smitten with Harry, the errant knight who does the right if not the smart thing in a world where good and evil collide, and the helpless need a champion.

I'll be talking about urban fantasy, the mystery within urban fantasy, STORM FRONT as a PI detective story, and STORM FRONT as a fantasy novel.  I'll also be analyzing Harry and the other major characters.  

SPOILER ALERT:  I'm afraid there's no way to talk about "The Dresden Files" without spoilers from other novels.  I’ll try to keep this minimal, but the comments section may prove to be a major spoiler zone.  You have been warned.


A BRIEF HISTORY OF URBAN FANTASY:

In the late 1980s, a number of fantasy authors began to write about the various creatures and tropes of fantasy like elves, other supernatural beings, and magic in contemporary times in big cities rather than the past or in mythic places.  

The Encyclopedia of Fantasy defined these urban fantasy novels as “texts where fantasy and the mundane world interact, intersect, and interweave throughout a tale which is significantly about a real city.”
Authors like Charles de Lint created stories where the real urban world and Fairy met.  Other writers during this period include Emma Bull and Mercedes Lackey.

The heart of these stories are folkloric in tone with a sense of a fairy tale being retold in modern terms.  The language of the novels is lyrical and poetic, and events from the main characters' point of view have a sense that something may or may not be happening.

This type of urban fantasy is now called traditional urban fantasy, and a current writer is Neil Gaiman.

In the late 1990s and beyond, a different type of urban fantasy began to appear.  These novels had their basis, not from fairy tales, but from the horror and mystery genres.  Other media influences included the TV show BUFFY THE VAMPIRE SLAYER.  

These contemporary urban fantasies were popularized by Laurell K. Hamilton with her Anita Blake novels.  They have a strong protagonist who has some form of supernatural power.  

The narrative is usually in first person, and the world has a strong sense of good and evil.  

The real world is the gritty reality of the big city where the natural and the supernatural mix, often to disastrous results.  The main character often has a probable sexual and crime-solving partner who is supernatural and a forbidden sexual partner either by society or by her/his own standards.  

The main plot is a mystery which the main character must solve to prevent chaos, whether it be preventing bad supernaturals from harming humans or some form of disaster from occurring.  

Usually, the main character is in law enforcement-- a police officer, a private detective, or a bounty hunter.  

After the Anita Blake series became popular, authors from other genres entered the market.  Romance authors, in particular, cross-pollinated the contemporary urban fantasy with the romance. 

Instead of the mystery being the plot driver, the romance is the central plot driver.  The mystery became the secondary plot.  In a vast majority of these books, one of the romantic partners is supernatural, and the other is human or part human.

The most successful and influential authors include Christine Feehan and Sherrilyn Kenyon.   

MYSTERY AND URBAN FANTASY

A mystery is the driving plot in the contemporary urban fantasy.  By driving plot I mean the plot the main character follows to achieve his/her goal. The fantasy elements are the building blocks of the world and the characters.

Mysteries by themselves have many varieties including the cozy and the detective novel, the police procedural, the spy novel, and the thriller.  For a detailed list of mystery types, I recommend 


For every type of mystery plot, there are urban fantasy versions.  Even the CSI forensics mystery is used by Laura Gilman in her HARD MAGIC series about wizards who use scientific magic to discover the culprits in magical crimes.  

Jim Butcher in "The Dresden Files" uses the private detective mystery as his plot driver.

Wednesday, May 29, 2013

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Monday, May 27, 2013

Announcing A Summer Reading Series


Next week, I’m starting a series of articles on Jim Butcher’s first “Dresden Files” novel, STORM FRONT.  "The Dresden Files" is considered the gold standard of urban fantasy as well as one of the first and most successful of these series.  

I'll be talking about urban fantasy, the mystery within urban fantasy, STORM FRONT as a PI detective story, and STORM FRONT as a fantasy novel.  I'll also be analyzing Harry and the other major characters.  

Even if you aren’t a fan or writer of urban fantasy, I suggest you keep up with these articles because you’ll learn something.  This novel may also show you what you’ve been missing by not reading urban fantasy.

Reader participation will be very welcome.

You will have at least two weeks to find and read STORM FRONT before I start talking spoilers.  

SCHEDULE NOTE:  I’ll be posting these articles every Monday, and I will continue my Wednesday “Links of Interest.”

QUESTIONS:  I’ll continue to answer writing questions, but I’ll answer them directly to you rather than via my blog so you’ll receive them in a timely manner.  I’ll post the questions to the blog after I finish this reading course.  To ask me a question, use my blog or my listserv to contact me.